Writing Week 4

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Every day you pass a door.  It’s always closed and locked.  One day, as you pass, you notice that the door is open.  You step inside.  Write a story about what was on the other side of that door.

21 comments:

  1. A resteront full of pepole.

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  2. Shonteal Cresswell19 May 2017 at 20:31

    I think that the wind could make the door shut when you go inside and some one will lock the door.

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  3. A little Minecraft village . The villagers where walking around everything was made cobble stones wooden stair cases and grass ,the villagers where harvesting the wheat crops.

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  4. ALICE MCKENZIE THE BEST21 May 2017 at 00:03

    I think it could be a door to an ancient castle. I think it is very quiet in there because the king and queen don't want anyone to come in. The king and queen are toasting marshmallows on the fire like we did and they have an annoying little dog called Sprinkles that guards the door so strangers can't get in

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  5. R-O-B-B-I-E ROBBIE...21 May 2017 at 21:49

    Inside thir was a hird of bulls.once I opened the door they all ran out onto the stret.

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  6. SIERRA THRUPP IS THE BEST!!!!!!!21 May 2017 at 22:18

    If I walked though that door I would end up in a paradise. Which would be awesome! Also with every step I take something will appear something you will find in a dreamland. Like macaws, food and candy that is ginormous and you can eat it, etc...

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  7. If I walk in through this door that I have always wanted to, it will be a soccer pitch just for me to play on with my friends when I tell them and when they are allowed to.

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  8. One day I was walking to school and there was always a locked door, but the next time I walked past it was unlocked. Inside was there was a magical land called candy land. So I decided to walk in and hang out there for the day. There was also other lands further down as I walked around.

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  9. Reuben 🏍🚜🚤✈️22 May 2017 at 00:23

    I peeped my head in a door and I saw lol land. It was so loud because of all the laughing! I walked in and got tickled by a tickle machine so hard that I ran out.

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  10. Once upon a time there was a big door that was always loked. Then 1 day i walked passed and it was unlocked. I steped inside and got a big surprise, it was a big party for me. All my friends and family were there. The cake was a big choklate one. When i turned around i saw a pinata. When it broke all the candy fell out. We then ate and then played tag for 2 hours. Mum said it was time to go home, we hopped out and Dad locked the door. The End

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  11. speny weny😎❗22 May 2017 at 21:49

    i opened the door and there was a big party so i desided to hop in. there were people dancing so i started dancing. the music suddenly
    stopd so i ran home the end.

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  12. Esther Bradley22 May 2017 at 22:42

    One day I was walking to gymnastics when I saw that the door that was always locked was opened so I stepped inside to see what was behind it. When I looked through the door I saw the biggest pet shop ever.There were tones of animals and some of them were doing tricks.The End by Esther.

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  13. Aiden is sic/Dude/77/😁23 May 2017 at 23:53

    On the way to motor-cross there is always a locked door but one day it open's and I looked inside it was a wish tree so I only got one wish I chose A mansion and when I got home from motor-cross went to sleep in my new mansion.

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  14. I walked through the door there was a mansion with a swimming pool, waterslides and a lazy river. I fell into the water and floated on my back around the lazy river.

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  15. I peeked through the door I saw a tennis court I opened the door and walked in. I played tennis till I was exauhsted.

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  16. Cody likes the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!24 May 2017 at 13:33

    I was walking then I striked the door that had always been shut and locked but this time it was OPEN! When I walked in there was a minecraft villiage with village's running crazy. Then I saw a chest, I opened the chest and found a wooden sword, wooden axe and wooden shovel and I attached zombies and then left.


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  17. Pera the best gymnast the winner24 May 2017 at 23:50

    Every time I walked past the door to walk to school. I seen a brown boring old door that was never opened but one day it was opened there was the gymnastics training for anybody, So I tried it out I could do everything. Then it was time for me to go home so of I went.

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  18. On the other side of the door, I find a candy land, with unicorns, lollipops, chocolate, ice cream and jelly. It is an amazing sight, but then I realize that its 10 minutes to 9am and I have to go to school, but I don't want to go.

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  19. Briar outta SPACE!!!!!!!25 May 2017 at 09:22

    when i saw the door opend i went in and i saw famous GAMERS!! i went oh my gosh! so i played minecraft with them and then i saw MOJANG!! and then we played alot video games

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  20. Briar outta SPACE!!!!!!!25 May 2017 at 09:24

    and then my friends came we played games and we went home and we had a sleepover!!

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  21. Once there was a door opened I walked in and was surprised because I saw a pizza party all my friends were there and on the table was a pizza cake it was made out of pepperoni pizzas and I was amazed.

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