Writing Week 2

Can you retell this in your own words.



19 comments:

  1. Ben is the best4 May 2017 at 20:38

    I liked when the elafint did not brack the trapalen and when it did 3 frant flips

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  2. Aiden is the siccest4 May 2017 at 20:40

    at the start he is walking the hall then he sees a trampoline then starts jumping then goes down and. the end.

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  3. The elephant was walking down a hallway in some building then she puts one foot on a step and the the other feet did the same then she, did jumps and flips on the trampoline the goes out of the building.

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  4. Esther Bradley4 May 2017 at 21:54

    The elephant walked down a path and then he got on a trampoline and started to jump and then every time he
    jumped he jumped bigger and bigger and then he started
    to do flips and then t the end he got off the trampoline
    and walked away

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  5. Shonteal Cresswell4 May 2017 at 23:39

    The elephant was walking and there were a trampoline and she or he went on it and jumped so high at it almost got the roof and walked away . the end

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  6. yool CODY!!! is the dud.6 May 2017 at 21:44

    The elephant walked then he saw a trampoline he started to bounce he got higher and higher then he got high enough to do flips so he started to do flips and then he got off the trampoline and walked away.

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  7. The elephant was walking then it went on a trampoline and started to bounce and he bounced very high and did flips then it got of and walked away.

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  8. The Elephant walked into the gym and saw a trampoline . He bounced until he was almost touching the roof then he did flips. The end πŸ€“πŸŸ.

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  9. speny weny😎❗8 May 2017 at 00:20

    the elephant walked into the room and then he started bouncing then he got higher and higher then he started doing flips

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  10. ALICE THE BEST8 May 2017 at 22:15

    The elephant was walking into the trampoline room and bounced so high that the elephant started to do flips.

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  11. The elephant slowly walked into a room he found a trampoline. He got on it using some steps. He started to get higher and higher when he got high enough he started to do flips and tricks.

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  12. sofia robertson9 May 2017 at 16:02

    The elephant was in a white room then the elephant found a trampoline so the elephant started bouncing on the trampoline and started bouncing higher and higher then started doing elephant front flips and back flips.

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  13. The elephant jumped and backflipped on the trampoline. He jumped real high. His ears went up.

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  14. robbie AKA THE RAIN MAKER wins again!9 May 2017 at 23:50

    The elephant walked into the room and got on the trampoline and started jumping. When it got high it started doing flips, almost up to the ceiling. Its trunk and ears were flapping. Then it got off the trampoline.

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  15. The elephant walked into the room and saw a trampoline so he started to jump on it then he did flips then he got off the end πŸ™„πŸ˜‰

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  16. Pera the best gymnast11 May 2017 at 00:43

    The elephant starts to to walk into a building with a trampoline
    then he walks up the blocks and on to the trampoline. He bounced higher and higher until he did a front flip and then a back flip then he done his final flip and went of the tramp and walked out of the building. THE END

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  17. The elephant slowly walks up to the trampoline and then slowly climbs up onto it.He then starts to bounce on it getting higher and higher then he does some flips and then he gets off the trampoline and walks away slowly.THE END

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  18. Briars da best at mincraft!!11 May 2017 at 15:31

    the huge elephant was jumping on the trampaline he went flying so high he did a back-flip!!!

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  19. Once there was an elephant he was walking in the halls and he saw a trampoline he walked on the tiny stool and he started to do little bounces next the elephant did big bounces he was so high he was able to do back flips and front flips and he was tired so the elephant went down the stool and walked away.

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