Wk 1 Writing

This term we are going to look at writing persuasive arguments, This is when you try to convince the person that is reading your writing to agree with you. You use sentence starters like,,, I believe, I think, My next point etc.
Choose one of the ideas below and persuade us to agree with you.

19 comments:

  1. I beleive that animals should not be kept in zoos because they need to stay in there natural habitate. My next point is they need to be able to hunt and defend themselves and learn to protect ther families. We would not like to be taken away from our families and put on show for everyone to stare at us.

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  2. I believe that all kids should play sports because it is good for us.My next point is sports can help keep kids busy and keep kids physically active.Sports can help us build our self-esteem,self-confidence and social skills.

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  3. Shonteal Cresswell23 July 2017 at 01:13

    I believe that everything should be treated with respect because if you annoy it or harm it will not respect you and it will feel sad or it might lash out at you.

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  4. REUBEN IS THE BOSS!!!πŸ’Ž23 July 2017 at 15:25

    I believe that we should not eat junk food but eat healthy food.

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  5. I believe that it is not very kind to take away animals from their families and into zoos. If they are babies they need to be taught in their natural habitat. They also learn better skills in wild.

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  6. Esther Bradley23 July 2017 at 23:16

    I think all kids should have to play sports because it keeps you healthy and encourages everyone to be part of a team.

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  7. Briar!!!:D miss you guys!!24 July 2017 at 12:41

    i think that animals should be free cause the cant be in cages

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  8. ALICE MCKENZIE!!!!24 July 2017 at 21:12

    I think that animals should be let out of their cages because they can learn more stuff in their own natural habitats. I believe that animals don't like to be in zoos especially lions and tigers!!!!

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  9. spencer dum dumπŸ˜’™25 July 2017 at 01:36

    all kids should play sport then they will be fitt

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  10. Isaac R2-D2!!!!!!!!25 July 2017 at 21:07

    I believe that pizza is healthy because it has veges on top. My next point is that pizza has cheese on top and we need it for our bones.

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  11. CODY THE DUM DUM AT SPORTπŸ˜’πŸ˜©πŸ˜­πŸ˜”πŸ™πŸ˜25 July 2017 at 21:19

    All kids should have to play any of the sports in the world if they can because it keeps you healthy, strong, fit, energy, fueled up, good play, good attitude, it helps your brain, to be prat of a team player , and I it is fun playing sport!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  12. Exercise is good for you so i think we sholed play sports.

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  13. korah is a pokemon master26 July 2017 at 20:59

    I believe we should all play sport.my next point is it keeps us active.I play a sport and it is rugby.

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  14. I think all kids should play a sport because it keeps them fit and healthy and it is fun playing sports.

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  15. Sofia Robertson26 July 2017 at 22:35

    I think all junk food is unhealthy my next point is that junk food has sugar and unhealthy fat in it.

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  16. ''hi i'm fat AIDO''.27 July 2017 at 00:36

    I think that animals should not have to live in zoos because when you take photos of birds it blinds them.
    my next point is that animals should be FFFFFRRRREEEEE!!!!

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  17. I think evryone should play sport because it is fun

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  18. I think animals should not be kept in zoos, because some times they have tiny enclosures and they have hardly any space. But if the animal is becoming extinct I think they should be kept in a zoo, so the people that work at the zoo can breed more of them.

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